Tyler's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[DAD and Applejack]

like spibby said

yeah, the pony looks like a mans face. your thumbnail mislead me.

also, your dad proportions are weird.

[LARCEN - sprite to art]

nice change

pretty good recreation to vector format, but

lol whats up with his left thumb?

[Ace Pilot Poster Ads]

pretty snazzy

I like the style and the color schemes you went with, it looks pretty cool. The hierarchy of the information you're trying to get out doesn't make sense to me though.

The orange one, the first thing my eye is drawn to is the black at the bottom of the image. The game title and information doesn't grab my eye as it should. Try making the title have more dominance in the composition.

I really dig the pink one too, but my first glance at it was disorienting. Same thing as I said the orange piece really. I think these (aside from the green one) are really nifty and cool and I think its a wonderful idea to spread them around.

Additionally as one last thought, if you are pinning them up around town, seeing them physically printed and in front of you can help a lot seeing what works and what doesn't work.

btw good luck with the game !

AlmightyHans responds:

thanks man!

[Lola]

great design

this looks wonderful. I admire the choices you made for her costume, but what truly stands out to me is the facial features. Those eyes are so captivating; I love the way you made them

[Fat Boss]

I like

his manboobs. Such attractive definition you bring to his delicious zones. + 8

[Nyte Wotch]

:)

I really enjoy the color palette and line work on this. I'm not really sure what is going on but I like it and that's fine with me. I really dig your stuff.

CloudEater responds:

Interesting, I thought the colour was the bad part. Thanks for the review.

[The Parachute Endings]

You are getting so much better :D

I think youâEUTMre improving quite a deal and this pixel aesthetic you have going on seems to be working very well for you. Keep it up, handsome man.

foxypanda69 responds:

Well thanks sexy. I must also agree that your vector artwork has improved greatly as well :3

[EFN Black Ace in 3D]

wellly wells

The models themselves are pretty nifty and what not, but my review today will be critical of presentation.

I've noticed this in your other stuff, and what always feels really out of place and poorly done is the type (font) you use on the images. It doesn't pop or look the least bit compelling. You should look into typography and stuff if you are going to include it in your work.

Second, I'd like to mention composition: The character is right in the center and it just feels really plain and the shot isn't dynamic in the least bit. Maybe you could look up composition stuff too.

Hope that doesn't sound like I was bashing, because that's not my intention. Just these small things could improve your presentation of pieces. Anyway the models are nice.

VidGameDude responds:

yeh trying my best to make the best but what can yeh do im a newb ^_^

anyways yes i do think the text is poorly placed and awry but i cant photoshop text onto pictures so i used 3D text instead and position it.

the dynamics for my characters are not so easy cause i cant rig characters to move well and string rig is a pain in the arse for bots. i cant even envelope so i kinda hope that someone can do these things for me.

thanks for the review!

l8s

[The Gay Brothers]

I saw this,

and now my keyboard is drenched in semen.

[Chocobro]

BROS HOS AND CHOCOBOS

That ChocoBRO needs to get himself a ChocoHO.

It's beautiful; what handsome lineart you have, my friend!