Tyler's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Parachute Endings]

You are getting so much better :D

I think youâEUTMre improving quite a deal and this pixel aesthetic you have going on seems to be working very well for you. Keep it up, handsome man.

foxypanda69 responds:

Well thanks sexy. I must also agree that your vector artwork has improved greatly as well :3

[EFN Black Ace in 3D]

wellly wells

The models themselves are pretty nifty and what not, but my review today will be critical of presentation.

I've noticed this in your other stuff, and what always feels really out of place and poorly done is the type (font) you use on the images. It doesn't pop or look the least bit compelling. You should look into typography and stuff if you are going to include it in your work.

Second, I'd like to mention composition: The character is right in the center and it just feels really plain and the shot isn't dynamic in the least bit. Maybe you could look up composition stuff too.

Hope that doesn't sound like I was bashing, because that's not my intention. Just these small things could improve your presentation of pieces. Anyway the models are nice.

VidGameDude responds:

yeh trying my best to make the best but what can yeh do im a newb ^_^

anyways yes i do think the text is poorly placed and awry but i cant photoshop text onto pictures so i used 3D text instead and position it.

the dynamics for my characters are not so easy cause i cant rig characters to move well and string rig is a pain in the arse for bots. i cant even envelope so i kinda hope that someone can do these things for me.

thanks for the review!

l8s

[Robot Day 2010]

not bad!

Mmm I can dig it. I like the clean, cartoony approach. The composition. design and colors of the robots are quite excellent. Also, the graphics look perfect for an animation - possibly a robot day animation!

CharlieCheeseBurger responds:

Thanks! I appreciate your feedback.
Y'know, you're the second person to have said that this looks like it could be animated. I'm not much of an animator at the moment, but maybe someday...

[Party Animals]

So sexy

I love this.

Sure there are many things that could be fixed up, but the content in here
is fucking priceless. The poses the characters are in, and what they are doing is so damn comical. I think, if this is the drawing quality you treated your animations with, they would look pretty damn fine.

foxypanda69 responds:

baby, you got it!

[Golem 3D]

TOP NOTCH

I like how there is a naked man gazing into his genitalia.

Spibby responds:

He's taking in all it's glory, but it's not for our eyes