Tyler's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Red]

Pretty good job. It's annoying seeing people complain and chastise you about the filesize, and unfortunately thats probably the way its going to be for a while until people realize different files beyond .swfs can be uploaded to newgrounds.

Anyway, the modeling was pretty good. I think you animated the emotion nicely, but the face was a bit too cartoony to take seriously. Not because you didn't do a good job, just the way it was proportioned. Music was very fitting, but some of the sounds, like the mouth opening, sighs, and gunshots were pretty awkward sounding. But other than that, good job man.

Iznvm responds:

thanks sir.. Im gunna continue hounding people back when they complain to anyone using the mp4 player about file size...
There's a ton of stuff I need to learn and practice mainly with facial expressions and rigging.. in the future, hopefully I'll be able to express more emotions through my characters=)

[Manhunt]

Good job MCGEE, i love you

[PokePorn Quest]

hahah this is great. everything you do makes me giggle

golfinho responds:

:)...........

[STARBARIANS - Episode 1]

That was phenomenal, easily the most beautiful animation on the site! Awesome job man. Im forever envious of your skill.

[P vs Z]

This was funny and cute. I like all the stop motion stuff you've been doing- its really charming.
I don't know why I haven't commented on your work before- its great stuff! Keep it up man

[ZTV News Promo]

I can't say I see the point of what you're trying to show the viewer; is this going to be a news show or a showcase for more of your work? Where is the content?

Also, if that was supposed to be a joke it really wasn't funny. I don't know if this is related to your prior work, but as a standalone piece it was weak. There is really nothing to show - the only reason this has the score it does is because of your eternally fapping/deprived fanbase (Call me biased, I have no respect for hentai artists).

Though incredibly brief, art and animation were pretty decent.

[Game of The Year Edition]

Your animation and illustrations were really well done. The content gave me a few GIGGLES too, good work!

[DrumParadise]

Your stuff has been getting better somewhat. The content after color was introducted felt as though it were randomly placed. The little conflict at the beginning was kind of interesting, but then the audience never sees it again after you introduce video game characters and other whacky stuff. I felt like those things at the end really detracted from the beginning.

The animation in the beginning was better too, it could stand to have some more frames and cleaner linework though.

Hope that helps.

YouriX responds:

Thanks for taking the time to review my work Tyler :). I was going for a random like animation and a sudden use of color. Maybe if i somehow introduced the colors it would have felt more natural. Also i will try using more inbetween frames and cleaner lines.
Again thanks for the review :)

[TOME Episode 03]

Not bad, improving. Few things:

If its a video game, making the characters something for the audience to care about is difficult. Why did the flame girl stop him from killing a virtual character? What significance does that have if they are virtual characters played by people? It doesn't seem like a big deal, and it actually irritates me that they treated a character in a game with morality as though it was a real person - when the audience realizes thats not the case.

I know you're presenting this like its a video game, which is fine, but there are little to no cuts. It gets monotonous watching the same poses with lip-synch loops running over them. Adding some cuts might present variety needed to keep the viewer engaged. I think a lot of success you're having is because the cast is astounding. Vocals and music are very important, and you do a fine job of it in this, but the visuals just aren't engaging enough as is.

Also, whats up with the girl sniffing her finger every five seconds? Really bizarre. And that Nylocke gag is really forced.

But im glad to see you improving your stuff.

[Animation Critique]

It was really clever and cute to use your sisters voice in this video. Art could still use some work, but it was effective enough in this. Nice job.