I like your characters and this design is fun, but the colors need to pop a bit more for something like this. The text color makes it almost illegible if one were to take a step back from the screen.
For the piece as a whole, I know the subdued colors are kind of your thing and are fitting for your series/style. But for something more "iconic" or meant for a shirt (like this), the color choices could stand to be a bit more vibrant. Just my two cents.
well all I know is I drew this in in a matter of minutes and really put no thought into the color, probably because I was trying to give it a purposely bad look to fit the dumb text. I just sorta clicked colors and went with it for this one! Maybe I'll make a polished version. Dunno!
What thick lips. Im proud of you, improving all the time.
Why thank you! (:
pretty snazzy
I like the style and the color schemes you went with, it looks pretty cool. The hierarchy of the information you're trying to get out doesn't make sense to me though.
The orange one, the first thing my eye is drawn to is the black at the bottom of the image. The game title and information doesn't grab my eye as it should. Try making the title have more dominance in the composition.
I really dig the pink one too, but my first glance at it was disorienting. Same thing as I said the orange piece really. I think these (aside from the green one) are really nifty and cool and I think its a wonderful idea to spread them around.
Additionally as one last thought, if you are pinning them up around town, seeing them physically printed and in front of you can help a lot seeing what works and what doesn't work.
btw good luck with the game !
thanks man!
:)
I really enjoy the color palette and line work on this. I'm not really sure what is going on but I like it and that's fine with me. I really dig your stuff.
Interesting, I thought the colour was the bad part. Thanks for the review.
You are getting so much better :D
I think youâEUTMre improving quite a deal and this pixel aesthetic you have going on seems to be working very well for you. Keep it up, handsome man.
Well thanks sexy. I must also agree that your vector artwork has improved greatly as well :3
wellly wells
The models themselves are pretty nifty and what not, but my review today will be critical of presentation.
I've noticed this in your other stuff, and what always feels really out of place and poorly done is the type (font) you use on the images. It doesn't pop or look the least bit compelling. You should look into typography and stuff if you are going to include it in your work.
Second, I'd like to mention composition: The character is right in the center and it just feels really plain and the shot isn't dynamic in the least bit. Maybe you could look up composition stuff too.
Hope that doesn't sound like I was bashing, because that's not my intention. Just these small things could improve your presentation of pieces. Anyway the models are nice.
yeh trying my best to make the best but what can yeh do im a newb ^_^
anyways yes i do think the text is poorly placed and awry but i cant photoshop text onto pictures so i used 3D text instead and position it.
the dynamics for my characters are not so easy cause i cant rig characters to move well and string rig is a pain in the arse for bots. i cant even envelope so i kinda hope that someone can do these things for me.
thanks for the review!
l8s
not bad!
Mmm I can dig it. I like the clean, cartoony approach. The composition. design and colors of the robots are quite excellent. Also, the graphics look perfect for an animation - possibly a robot day animation!
Thanks! I appreciate your feedback.
Y'know, you're the second person to have said that this looks like it could be animated. I'm not much of an animator at the moment, but maybe someday...
So sexy
I love this.
Sure there are many things that could be fixed up, but the content in here
is fucking priceless. The poses the characters are in, and what they are doing is so damn comical. I think, if this is the drawing quality you treated your animations with, they would look pretty damn fine.
baby, you got it!
TOP NOTCH
I like how there is a naked man gazing into his genitalia.
He's taking in all it's glory, but it's not for our eyes
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