I never thought I could ever enjoy a Naruto parody but you proved me wrong. This was hilarious
ALSO SICK RAPPING
I never thought I could ever enjoy a Naruto parody but you proved me wrong. This was hilarious
ALSO SICK RAPPING
Thanks man! There are some decent parodies out there so I'm honored.
Now that's a rare pepe. Congratulations, you are now on the ADL watchlist.
PRAISE KEK
PRAISE!! :D
Nice style, cute short. I can't hide my bias, anything that makes fun of hipsters gets a 5/5 from me ;p
Speaking of hipsters... (i'm probably one. I like art and have a beard. Thus... it may be some self loathing going on...) A day after i posted this... i saw an ad for a T-shirt company. (Nice products) but the model was THAT EXACT hipster, beard and all! (Hope I don't get sued!)
Unfunny tumblr "comedy". Bad character design and weak animation. The audio mix also hurts my ears; its too shrill at some points. The only saving grace here is that your color palette choices are pretty good. I give you props for having the balls to use a risky subject like race.
A quick glance at your tumblr where half of your posts are blaming white people for everything makes me wonder if this is really comedy or if you just hate white people.
I made fun of black people in my last cartoon and all you offended triggered insecure white people had nothing to say back then. There was no "IS THIS REALLY COMEDY OR ARE YOU ACTUALLY RACIST!" when it wasn't making fun of your own race. There's been a ton of cartoons on this site that are racist towards other races and you will eat them up like candy and never question if the creator is actually racist. So you can sit and seethe.
Didn't really find it funny. Art was pretty good looking though; nice job there.
Also, why has vuvuzela music become the go to noise for parodies? It's way overdone.
I just thought it'd be a nice little reference to Dragon Ball Pee.
I love the visuals in this; you really killed it in that department! I remember seeing your posts about photoshop animation - looks like all that learning payed off.
The story was way simple, but it was totally fitting and gracefully shown imo. Nice job!
Thanks man! Took a while to get it all down, but now that I'm more fluent in the program it's definitely got its advantages
hahah holy fuck I did not see that coming. I think this is my favorite thing I've seen on this site in a few months.
BTW, your improvements over the last few years are definitely noticeable. Awesome work, yo.
<3 thanks dude
but hey now, lets not jump to conclusions, my animation will never be as good as it was in jewish vampire on ice, cmon maaan
Not bad for practice, though, there are a few things here that bothered me: namely the backgrounds, consistency and music.
The choices for backgrounds in this are awfully inconsistent throughout; some look like they were done by you in flash, and others look like photos you found off the internet. I'd say the set of stairs the girl bikes down are by far the most out of place; those stairs are huge and the rendering of your character was tiny in comparison. I'd suggest more consistency on those BGs in the future.
In terms of the drawings and animation, I felt it was pretty good overall. Seems like the main character wasn't always on model the whole time though. especially around :17 compared to say :24.
As for the music, well, Kabalevsky's 12 Comedian's Gallop feels far too energetic and exciting of a song for the content here. Nothing in this short was that exciting to need such music. Also, along with the music, the ending here kind of seemed like a rip from the short animation: Fumiko's Confession (which also used the exact same music as this).
Anyway, im not writing this to be a jerk; just giving some constructive criticism, especially given that this is supposed to be practice.
yup i mentioned that short in the credits under the inspiration
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